Monday, September 15, 2008
The hocky sweater
The hockey sweater is a story where all the kids wear a montreal canadians sweater while playing hockey. They all wanted to look like Maurice Richards. Then one day one of the kids sweater got to small and he neaded another one so his mother writes a letter to one of her close friends and say's. " Would you be kindenough to send me a Canadiens'sweater for my son who is ten yearsold and a little too tall for his age andDocteur Robitaille thinks he's a little120 .too thin? I'm sending you three dollars and please send me what's leftif there's anything left. I hope your wrapping will be better than lasttime. " Then two weaks later the sweater arives at there houde and it is the wrong sweater. The next day he where's it to the hockey game and the other kids don't like the sweater and they don't let him play.
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The hockey sweater is a story where all the kids wear a
(m)ontreal canadians sweater while playing hockey. They all wanted to look like Maurice (Richards). Then one day one of the kid(')s sweater got (to) small and he (neaded) another one so his mother writes a letter to one of her close friends and (say's. - says,)"Would you be (indenough) to send me a Canadiens(' you don't need an apostrophe)sweater for my son who is ten years old and a little too tall for his age and Docteur Robitaille thinks he's a little(120 . CHECK YOUR QUOTE)too thin? I'm sending you three dollars and please send me what's left_if there's anything left. I hope your wrapping will be better than lasttime." Then two (weaks) later the sweater (arives) at there (houde) and it is the wrong sweater. The next day he (where's) it to the hockey game and the other kids don't like the sweater and they don't let him play.
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